I keep it simple:
A developmental edit is $0.013/word and includes a 10+ page letter addressing the strengths and areas to work on in the themes, character development, worldbuilding, pacing, point of view, plot, dialogue, and more. In-line edits and comments in the manuscript tie in with specific sections in the letter. I also offer a phone or video call before the edit to make sure I understand your vision and after the edit to answer any questions.
I founded Olivia Edits because I want to provide services that allow authors to feel empowered, connected, determined, understood, and inspired during their writing journey. Contact me here or at oliviaedits2 [at] gmail [dot] com to see if your manuscript would benefit from a developmental edit.